I see you stumble every day,
Waiting for her to see the way,
Silently waiting for her to slip,
While she's waiting for your love to rip,
And every time you think she'll fall,
She shoves you back up against that wall,
You know she can't keep this up forever,
Though she never seems to get any better,
You love her, care about her, you truly do,
So why can you never pull her through?
'Cause her heart's calloused,
You know that's why,
Now whenever you think that,
I watch you cry,
And since you two don't share the same view,
This is all that I have to say to you:
Just keep trying,
You'll get your chance,
You'll see it happen,When angels and serpents dance.
Now I watch you killing yourself,
Trying to keep her soul on that shelf,
You always try to save her from this hell,
But she just won't come out of her shell,
You love her, care about her, you truly do,
So why can you never pull her through?
'Cause her heart's calloused,
You know that's why,
Now whenever you think that,I watch you cry,
And since you two don't share the same view,
This is all that I have to say to you:
Just keep trying,
You'll get your chance,
You'll see it happen,
When angels and serpents dance.
Now I know you'd give up all you own,
To save that calloused heart of stone,
Now I know you'd give up all you own,
To save that calloused heart of stone.
Just keep trying,
You'll get your chance,
You'll see it happen,
When angels and serpents dance.
20 comments:
Faith! WOW that was amazing! Please tell me it took you like 3 weeks to write so I don't look so crapy. lol No it was really aamazing!
O_O Really? I'm glad that you liked it! ^_^ And I think it took me like...20 mins. lol
I loved it, Faith! Your poem was great.
I hate you.
lol
no its really great
0o0o0 quick question? Do you like read poems to, and if so can you tell me the names of some good books because my mom wants me to start reading some. Thanks!
Awesome job. :) That makes me want to go write more poetry... Maybe I'll post some...
Chris: O_O Thankyou very, very much.
Katie: I've never read hardly any poetry before in my life, sorry. lol I just write so that I don't go crazy of hurt my self. lol
Nina: POST SOME THEN, DANGIT! And thank you.
Aha! I knew you all would like it!
You’re not trying to take credit for Faith's awesomeness, are you Josh?
Yeah Nina, you really do need to post more.
Faith, 6 more days till D day!!!!! Why would you hurt your self if you didn't write? That can't be good for you. The hurting your self not the writing. lol
Katie, what the heck is D day?
Ohh... I still dunno why you called it that, but I know what you're talking about now.
We shall just leave it at I got issues. ;) XD lol
D-Day???
I call it D-Day for 2 reasons.
1. I didn't know if Faith had Told josh yet that she was getting her Brown Belt yet. And I wanted to be the one to tell everyone when it was me, so I called Faiths day D-Day.
2. When I got my belt I wish I would have called it D-Day because it sounds cooler them "May" lol
Josh you don't know what D-Day is?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!??!!!?!??!?
WWII, Normandy, The movie 'Saving Private Ryan'? Any of them ring a bell?
Have any of you ever seen that movie by the way? The first 15 minutes are crazy!!!
Uhh, no, haven't seen the movie.
Haha! XD "Kaaaaatie - May, May, May, May, May..."
Ah... I remember doing that. may, may, may, may, may, may. But yeah I knew about the belt. (not by Faith if that makes a diference
X-/) And yes Katie I know very well what the other D-day was. I'm like the worlds biggest history buff (with emfasis on the buff o_0).
hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Josh how you make me laugh!
Thanks alot for the "May"s you guy I was almost starting to miss it.......not! lol jk
MAY, MAY, MAY, MAY, MAY, MAY, MAY
BTW it was your fault you got it every time I saw you. I knew it bugged you and I rolled with it. (all over your face jk) It's kinda' payback for the chicken wing fiascoe of 07. *sigh* gooood times, goood times.
It was all over your face that the Chicken Wing-thing bothered you!
Haha, yes, good times. XD
The chicken wings thing wasn't even me! It was leilah! I only hear about it when you told her not to tell me!
Gosh Chicken wings you have got to get your storys strate. lol
You Leila one in the same. You guys are like twins or something.
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